
He gazed out the passenger window, captivated by a farmhouse as it passed them by, the mood in the car foul to match the day. A flag, outstretched but folded upon itself matted with rain, splashed a muted stain against a pewter sky. A pond stretched, roadway to stoop with grass tufts lily padding the muddy surface offering no dry path to the farmhouse door. To the left, a pint-sized outhouse, adorned with a carved crescent moon, decorated the garden encircled by soggy mums awaiting deadheading on a sunny day. The mist so fine that the wipers squealed as they juddered across windshield, pause, judder, pause, squeal. A battle of wills, would she kill the wipers if he never asked?
Written in response to GirlieOnTheEdge’s Six Sentence Story Word Prompt: FARM. Visit her site and give it a try.
Photo by Lucas Pezeta
this is gorgeous! so much said, so much left unsaid. i LOVE it! ❤
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Thank you Ren
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of course!! 🙂
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Nice description of the scene in the car: “the mood in the car foul to match the day”
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Thanks Frank.
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IWIW* line of the week: “…splashed a muted stain against a pewter sky”
* I Wish I Wrote
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🙂 Thank you!
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